英文簡歷模板及點評

Educational Background

2004-2008 beijing University of *****
Bachelor of Food engineering GPA: 4.69 Ranking: 1/512
2008-2010 ****University
Master of Food Science GPA: 3.58
Honor and Certificate
New TOEIC Scored 950 in Nov, 2008
First prize in the National English Contest for College Students in May, 2005
First prize in the English Vocabulary Contest for College Students in Hunan
Excellent graduate of Hunan Province in May，2007
National scholarship during 2004-2005
First class scholarship (top 31%) of SCUT during 2007-2009
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Experience

University Experience

 Convenient Food Innovative R&D Competition 2008.3—2008.9
 Led our team, which is consisted of 8 postgraduates，enter the final competition
 Took charge of the conception ，planning and implementation of the product
 Student Almond Product Innovation Competition 2008.4—2008.9
 Led my team，Food Fantasy，enter the final competition and won 1000 RMB fund while 160 competitors existed all over the country
 President of liaison Department in Student Union 2005.9—2006.7
 Successfully cooperated with sponsors such as Dawn Glass，and Charm Creating in extracurricular activities
 Planed and organized a uniting activity among 7 universities in Changsha
 President of entertainment Department in my institute 2004.9—2005.7
 Successfully held two huge evening parties and a singing competition
 Society Experience
 Volunteer of 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games 2008.11—present
 Arranged the conference room where the mayor attended
 Successfully led a team of 13 people finish a survey about 10 uncivilized behaviors of Guangzhou residents sponsored by OCA，and was covered by 6 medias like Xinhuanet，163，Sohu，etc
 China mobile Audio & Video club in Guangzhou 2008.9—2008.10
 Promoted 139 mailbox of Guangdong Mobile
 Sold the A&V products of Beijing Yixun Cooperation
 Changsha branch company of Carslan 2005.9—2006.1
 Took in charge of Carslan’s business in campus as a sales representative
 Achieved over 1，000 RMB sales volume per month
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Skills and Hobbies

Fluent oral English and proficient in MS Office

點評：1、量化的數據提高簡歷的含金量，如：校特等獎學金(Top 0.3%) ，不僅是特等，更強調很小的比例，進一步體現人選的競爭優勢；

2、工作經驗相對豐富，包括校內校外，并且針對每項經歷有簡潔有效的說明，體現出人選承擔職責，以及獲得的績效；

3、篇幅適中，重點突出，飽滿，價值含量較高。

但也有不足之處，主要體現如下：

1、建議增加頁首頁尾，客戶在閱讀時會感覺更加專業；

2、最重要的問題在于缺乏針對性，無法判斷人選期待的職位需求，因此企業也無從判斷所提供的職位需求與人選的匹配度。建議增加求職目標，并且在求職目標中體現與相關職位的吻合性。

舉例，針對“外資或合資企業銷售類職位”的求職目標：能充分運用自己多年來在外資企業中所積累的銷售及市場開發、新行業新市場拓展、客戶關系維護等方面的豐富經驗，施展自己面對大客戶的顧問式銷售技能與老客戶關系管理能力，并與公司的市場發展相結合。

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