2015年6月英語六級作文點評匯總
試卷一:Practice is the key to knowledge
本題由諺語 “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” 引出話題,探討知識、實踐之間的關系,突出知識的必要性和實踐的關鍵性。話題與往年出現的正確學習方式、知識的實際效用和實踐帶來的優勢都有關聯,和大學生目前的學習生活聯系緊密。本題難度適中,考生對此普遍有話可說。
正如我們在考前押題中所講,建議考生針對此話題采取三段式寫作。
三段式:
第一段:簡要點明本篇文章的.兩個重點:知識(Nowadays almost every person has a clear notion about the importance of knowledge) 和實踐(the contribution of practice should also be awarded.),其中,先鋪墊知識重要性,接著用however轉折引出需要重點論述的后者,過渡到下文的具體論述。
第二段:確立觀點,具體論述:
原因一:實踐能把抽象理論變成具體成果 (it can turn abstract ideas into tangible results.)+ 具體說明(only through…)+ 反面說明(or else…);原因二:實踐可以把新舊知識串聯融合(moreover,…. connects what we already knew before);原因三:實踐能讓人產生基于知識的新想法(In addition,…more innovative thoughts are likely to be generated)
第三段:As far as I am concerned… 總結全文,強調句重申觀點。
試卷二:The Impact of Interest on People’s Success
本題要求考生就著名物理學家愛因斯坦的名言—— “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” 進行評述,提出自己的觀點并舉例論證。本題難點在于立意看似很高,考生需要確立主旨,結合實際,舉出貼合日常生活的大眾化的例子,從而化難為易、化繁為簡,寫出一篇有理有據的文章。
正如我們在考前押題中所講,針對此話題考生仍然可以采取三段式寫作。
三段式:
第一段:提出寓意、引出話題(As is known to all, the success of a person needs the right guidance and interest is undoubtedly the best teacher. Even Albert Einstein, the world-renowned physicist, said, “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.”) + 拉到自己較熟悉的結論觀點(So it is high time that people explore and cultivate their own interest.) = 引出下一段
第二段:確立觀點(Passionate curiosity can be developed in one’s childhood or in one’s sixties, but once it is ignited, it can change people’s way of study, work and living.) + 兩方面論證(On the one hand/ On the other hand)
第三段:I would like to quote… 引用名言警句,總結全文。
試卷三:
本題由諺語 “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.” 引出話題,探討成就與大事和小事之間的關系,對“大”與“小”進行辨證理解。話題與往年出現的成功、大事小事、積累、堅持等都有關聯。本題難度較大,從日常學習上升到成就與感悟,需要考生在平日多進行批判思考,才能在考場上有話可寫。
正如我們在考前押題中所講,建議考生針對此話題采取三段式寫作。
三段式:
第一段:首先從對成功的渴望做鋪墊(There is no doubt that many people want to be great and successful)接著轉折說不是所有都能達到預期,最后點明下文論述重點:每個人都能從做小事變為大人物(everyone can achieve high by doing small things in a great way)
第二段:確立觀點,具體論述:
觀點一:成功需要小事的長時間積累 (only when all small accomplishments add up can many impossibilities gradually turn to possibilities);觀點二:把小事做好不會讓自己有遺憾(one won’t regret for not making effort to achieve the goal);最后再加例子證明:小事做好就是成功(then this person is great in the eyes of the audiences)。
第三段:Therefore… 總結全文,強調不放棄夢想,做好每件小事就是成功。
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